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Lucy In the Sky With Darrell: Actualism Part 3

Lucy In the Sky With Darrell
Part 3

The Story of Actualism

In Iowa City

Poetry Comics


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~18. Poetry Comics



Poetry in Motion


WEINSTEIN: ARE POETRY COMICS TOO GRAPHIC?



Jeff Weinstein

The Village Voice

New York, NY

Jul. 29-Aug. 4, 1981

Poetry in Motion--In 1978

someone told Dave Morice

that good poems would paint

pictures in yourmind. A

lightbulb went on over the

poet’s head. Why not Poetry

Comics?



Unless you write poems, the chances

that you have read any contemporary

poetry within the last year, or even the last

10 years, or slim. This is not criticism of

the average reader, or of the average poet;

it’s just the way of the poetry world. You

may have nibbled at a sonnet with a

famous byline in The New Yorker, or tried

to swallow one of the well-meant meter-

laden exercises in the back pages of The

Nation, because this is all that’s generally

available. But do you remember the poem?

Do you talk about it? Do you want to read

more?

New poetry is mostly for poets only.

Poets publish and distribute their own and

other poets’ work in hundreds of small-

press books and magazines. Poets read

these poems (at least they always read

themselves), argue about them, make a

living by teaching them. Poets attend each

others’ readings, praise and backbite, as-

sort themselves into schools of differing

influences and direction. The poetry world

in this country is a tight little island, even

more circumscribed than the art world or

theater world, which at least acknowledge

outside interest and support. Internecine

poetry-world struggles may seem lively to

an insider, but from outside, it’s a bit like

watching people eat their own vomit.

On the other hand, if poets don’t take

care of themselves, who will? Certainly not

major publishers, who aren’t disposed to

print literature for which screen rights

can’t be sold. A university press might, if

the poet teaches at the same university,

and promises not to feel too bad if the work

is remaindered in three months because no

one paid $12.95 for 87 unpromoted pages

in cloth. Government small-press funding,

an important source for poets and writers,

is slowly going the way of all funding: to

grants tomb.

Present exceptions to poets-onlyh poems

usually spring from the schools of poetry

that try to speak to specific-audience

groups: feminist, gay and lesbian, black,

Hispanic, and Native American. Not all

this work is wonderful, or even what the

poet-poets call competent--think of a cat-

agory where that isn’t true--and its au-

diences are insular by definition; but it is

being read by nonpoets. Although one

would hope that some poet-poets would

notice this, specific-interest poetry is not

taken seriously by “professional poets” be-

cause it breaks their rules: it supposedly

lacks awareness of formal English-

language tradition, it flaunts its historical

content, and untrained people can read it,

want to read it. Content and popularityare

anathema to most of the poets-only poetry

world; they connote a lackof seriousness.

The poetry world distrusts popularity so

much that it has sometimes disowned its

own stars.
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But lately, the poetry world has not

produced any stars. Nor is there a public

democracy of exciting poets. We can only

hope for Emily Dickinsons. Poetry, at the

moment, is quiet. It may be that this reti-

cence, this apparent unconcern with the

world, is a failure not only of the poetry

support system or of a postliterate, image-

oriented audience, but of contemporary

poetry itself. One of the tactics of modern-

ism, of contemporary art of any kind, is to

find its audience, toinvent it if need be, or

at least to try.


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If I wasn’t on the outskirts of the poetry

world I would never have received copies

of Dave Morice’s Poetry Comics in the

mail. At first I didn’t know what they were,

couldn’t place them, which is a good sign.

As they piled up in the bathroom I began

to see first how amusing they are, and then

how smart. It’s one thing to illustrate, com-

ic-book style, Coleridge’s “Rime of the An-

cient Mariner” (issue number 12), a classic

story that lends itself to narrative illustra-

tion. Anyone who used Classics Illustrated

comics to slog through Adam Bede in high

school knows the predecessor here. It’s

something else, though, to break “The Red

Wheelbarrow” by William Carlos Williams

(“so much depends / upon / a red

wheel / barrow / glazed with

rain / water / beside the white / chickens”)

into narrative frames, as Morice does on

the first page of the first issue, or to storify

excerpts from Robert Browning’s “Fra

Lippo Lippi” (everybody’s favorite), or,

most tellingly, to request submissions from

poetry-world poets to bge comicized. This is

not a Joe Brainard-like reciprocal col-

laboration of a visual artist and poets.

Although there is a tradition of inspiration

in English poetry, either by religion, the

secular muses, or the Romantic spirit of

nature and dream, Morice’s inspiration is

poetry itself. Poetry makes him want to

draw comics. He is also inspired by the

poets-only poetry world.

Of course, Dave Morice, 34, is a poet.

He has been writing poems since he was

six. Once a student at the University of

Iowa’s Creative Writing Program--Iowa

City is the geographic center of the poetry

world--Morice, sometimes known as Dr.

Alphabet, publicly spray-painted the

world’s longest poem, connecting New

Jersey and Pennsylvania, across the New

Hope-Lambertville Bridge. He invented

“Joyce Holland,” a minimalist poet (her

one-word poems, Matchbook, are stapled

inside matchbooks) and performance

artist who had no small effect on the

poetry world; for three years Morice hired

an actress to concretize her at readings.

Morice also single-handedly created a

now-famous school of poetry--famous to

poets, anyway--called Cutism. His Cutist

Anthology includes poems by Sally

Lunchkins, Tommy Triped and others.

“Have a nice day” artwork by Roberta

Periwinkleshoe, and the requisite de-

fensive polemic by Samuel F. Romular.

Morice’s send-ups attest to his connection

to a school of poetry that began in Iowa

City (a real school, I think) called Ac-

tualism. “Actualism does to things what

light does to them,” says Darrell Gray

in the Actualist Manifesto. “Cute, Cuter,

Cutist,” says Morice, in the lost Cutist

Manifesto.

In 1978 someone told Morice that “good

poems would paint pictures in your mind.”

Morice wondered how “Prufrock” and Syl-

via Plath’s “Daddy” would look as comics,

so he drew them, publishing “Daddy” the

next year in Poetry Comics No. 1, which

he mailed to poets around the country. “Nev-

er liked Sylvia Plath before you,” wrote

Harley Lond, editor of San Francisco’s

small-press Intermedia magazine. Poet-

praise came rolling in: “Absolutely

brilliant…” (Bill Zavatsky), “i love ‘em &

so does my eight year old” (Joel Op-

enheimer), “Terrific” (Maureen Owen),

“… break through stony accretions!”

(Anne Waldman), “… best buy in the

universe” (Robert Creeley), etc., along

with offers to use their work. Since poets

]snapped at the bait, Morice published

their hermatic letters, and any others he

received, in the Muse’s Mailbag, now a

regular feature of the magazine. Poetry

Comics began to illustrate the boundaries

of the poetry world; poets love to be pub-

lished in any form.

The comics, however, are works in

themselves. Literary tradition sits heavily

on poets, and avant-garde poets since

Apollinaire have tried to throw it off by

attempty to “demystify” both their own

work and poetry in general. Morice de-

mystifies by juxtaposing familiar poems

with various--and variously successful--

borrowed and original cartoon styles,

sometimes to funny and sometimes to

touching effect. But he also creates a story

where little or none was apparent before

by heightening the narrative affinity of

language, an affinity more than one school

of present poets absolutely denies. Nar-

rativeness doesn’t harm poetry; even his

attempt to frame, for example, the non-

word syllables of John Cage into a nar-

rative progression still acknowledges the

randomness, the integrity, of the original.

Since narrative has had a bad rep among

modern poets, not everyone likes Morice’s

supposed playing around. Denise Levertov

mailed Morice her reservations, which he

published: “… The thing is, as with

parodies, a humorous angle on a non-hu-

morous work of art may have the un-

fortunate effect of spoiling the original--

i.e., one is liable to always have the recol-

lection of the jokey version looming up and

obstructing any further receptivity8 to

some beautiful poem or painting.” It’s a

weak poem that can’t hold its own, and

Levertov doesn’t see how the comics are

sometimes homages to the original, some-

times creative readings, and always work

in themselves. The “beautiful object” the-

ory of poetry has kept a lot of people at

arm’s length from some great work.

Morice’s comiocs do more than defusde cant;

they help to revivify poetry.

Comic books are worth attention too,

and so didact Morice, who teachers poetry

to children and senior citizens and is adept

at engaging them with tricks of the poetry

teacher’s trade., demystifies once again by

treating adult poet-poets to games,

puzzles, an elaborate poetry crossword

(first prize was $20 and 20 comic books,

and a poetry anthology), an Ana-

gramarama (Walt Whitman – Law? Haw!

I’m TNT), and Poetrivia (“In 1858 , Emily

Dickinson served as judge in the Bread

Division of the Cattle Show in Amherst”).

Last year Morice began to send PC out of

the poetry world, to a judiciously selected

group of “famous people” who are not, to

my knowledge, poets, and printed some of

the interlopers’ responses in the Muse’s

Mailbag. Art Linkletter, Liza Minnelli,

Virgil Partch, Elizabeth Taylor Warner, S.

I. Hayakawa, Vincent Price, Clayton

Moore (the Lone Ranger), Pearl Bailey,

John Kenneth Galbraith, or their secretar-

ies, to name a few, acknowledged receipt.

Many, like Ruth Gordon, were pleased:

“Your comics have a lot of style. A lot of

drive. And nice to hear from Iowa City. I

played a one night stand there in late 1916

or 1917 early on. Fair and Warmer. My

second year of acting and I was a leading

lady.” But others were less accessible.

“Since this type of humor is not the kind

that Lily finds amusing I am returning it to

you without having presented it to her.--

Julie Harding, Secretary/Assistant to Lily

Tomilin.” Morice sent these copies out of

curiosity, but also as a work of mail art.

(Mail art--using the post office to dis-

tribute work made expressly to be mailed)

has been utilized by artists like Eleanor

Antin to comment on, and solve by in-

corporating into their art, the problems

out of towners face in a New York cfen-

tered art and publishing world. With the

right mailing list…)

If only distribution were poetry’s major

problem. One can’t expect a public to hang

on every word of even the best modern

work the way a great proportion of the

English readership tracked Childe

Harold’s Pilgrimage as if it were news. (A

“great proportion” of England’s readers in